On a day when you’re tired and hot
And sore muscles are all that you’ve got
Just hop in the shower
And in less than an hour
You’ll feel better—a lot!
Dry, cracked earth cries out
Gentle rain falls from grey clouds
Earth sighs joyously
In praise of showers
Posted: September 12, 2012 in Humor, Just for fun, Nature, PoetryTags: haiku, humor, just for fun, limerick, Nature, poetry, rain, showering, showers
Comments
This, that and the other thing 
Was that a limericku? 😉
Seriously – if I can manage to be serious about the first one – I love these! They’re so different, and they’re both such great quick word pictures of “shower”.
Yes, #1 was a limerick. #2 a haiku. So pleased you enjoyed them. First one for humor, second for beauty.
Guess I ready through your comment too quickly and didn’t catch the limericku part. Cute! After driving all day, I read your comment again and saw it.
😀
Awww.. You seriously touched my heart with your words!!
The first stanza is so awesome 🙂
-Naima.