The seemingly simple premise of Friday Fictioneers is that a photo serves as the inspiration for a story of a mere 100-words.
But then the fun starts. What part of the photo do you choose? Do you use the photo in the story or as a jumping-off idea for something completely different? Dialogue? Historical fiction? A story torn from the headlines of the day?
The sky is the proverbial limit.
At the end of my story is the link that will take you to the page with links to all the stories. So if you’d like to read what other authors have seen in the photo, click there and then dip into what’s on offer
copyright DLovering
I Remember Skies*
I recall the glittering canopy of stars when I
…slept in the tree house with my best friend.
…shinnied up that tree to sneak through my window, avoiding grounding.
…reclined, awash in music and love, at our first-date outdoor concert.
…lay next to you, sated and laughing, in a mountain meadow on our honeymoon.
…camped in the backyard with you and the children.
…thought I’d die from the grief of your death.
In hospice I can’t see the stars. But I know soon I’ll be seeing them again with you.
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Letting go now. It’s time.
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*With thanks to The Moody Blues and “Your Wildest Dreams”
Dear Janet,
Mmmmm, very nice.
Aloha,
Doug
Thanks, Doug. Lovely to see you. 🙂
janet
This was awash in so much feeling—a steady ladder one climbs where you know more and more about this person’s love. Wonderful!
Thanks. The hope is always that love would grow and mature as the years go on and experience and wisdom are gained, again, hopefully.
janet
Lovely!
Thanks, Nadig.
janet
Oh Janet,this was so soulfully beautiful-loved the structure and how you encapsulated a whole lifetime in just 100 words-kudos!!
Thanks a lot. I like to play with structure to complement and emphasize things in my story so I’m glad you liked it.
janet
Yes,it was lovely Janet:-)
Once again a great take on the seemingly simple list with a common denominator.. a complete life drawn when drawing a line between the dots.
Bjorn, I cherish that “once again. Thanks.
janet
Sweet, sad and cleverly done. I really enjoyed this.
Thanks, EL. When Bill read it this morning, he said, “Another sad one,” but I didn’t feel it was sad. Life goes by, hers was good and she’s ready to leave. We should all be so blessed.
janet
Janet,
This is poetic and sad. Snippets of thoughts and memories. I enjoyed it.
Helena
Sorry no one was murdered, Helena, but at least there was death. 🙂 As I said to EL, I’m not sure it is sad. A good life, much love and being ready to go doesn’t sound bad to me.
janet
(sniff) So beautiful, Janet. Poetry in motion. 🙂
Thank you, Kent. (Now I have that song going through my head!)
janet
What? “She blinded me with science?”
“Poetry in Motion”
Such a sequence to lure the reader in – then POW. Excellent
That’s a compliment I much appreciate. It means I’m doing my job.
janet
Very tragically powerful Janet
Thanks, Hamish, but don’t you think it would be difficult to have a better life? Maybe if her husband had lived longer, but seems as though she lived and loved well and is now ready to die well.
janet
I’m not sure. You are right to give that message in this tale, and the story you presented is one a producer would look at as a synopsis, for sure – and of course it is a tale, albeit with a message. One can’t argue the happy life part nor the message. I saw tragedy by relating it to events around me, and the word ‘hospice’ brought the tragic twist for me. Actually if I was a producer or director I would want the ambiguity, but your character showed great dignity, courage, faith and a wonderful selflessness. Maybe she was right to think that. I think so. Your story was so well-written that it brought home those in hospices much younger. Which reinforces what you are saying, in many ways. But I’m beating round the bush. Cancer is becoming an epidemic and we recently lost a 21 year old woman where the final days in the hospice were so full of tragedy there are no words. My comment makes your story more powerful, as she is a woman with such a big heart and good soul she is able to look back. But I did relate it also to Sintija, the woman I mentioned, and it brings forward the debate to me, the importance, perhaps, of religion as a positive force, a new thought for this rebel, and a reconsideration of medical marijuana in Europe.
Hamish, this is a perfect example of each of us seeing the story from our perspective and both being correct. It also means I did something right in writing a story that could span different expectations and experiences. You know that as a Christian I believe in religion as a powerful force. As for medical marijuana, from what I’ve read, there are times when it’s very helpful. I don’t really know that state of it in Europe, another thing to look into when I have a bit more time.
This is one of the things I most enjoy about blogging and FF–the willingness of people to talk and engage and the ability to talk with people I wouldn’t meet in the course of my life without the internet. I always enjoy talking with you, even if we don’t agree. But as you once said, I think we agree on much more than either of us might have suspected when first we met. 🙂 Hopefully we’ll be able to actually meet in France this summer, which would be so much fun.
janet
Bittersweet romance. Watch out Nicholas Sparks.
Guess I’ll have to make it a bit longer for the book version. 🙂 Thanks, Gina.
janet
Yes, just a little bit longer. :light:
You’re welcome!
At least they’ll be with each other soon 🙂 That had so much packed in it from the beginning to the end. You took us through their entire life together…. Awesomeness!
Thanks a lot. I had to use that form to get everything in with 100 words. I’m happy it worked.
janet
Lovely passage of time. Thank you. Very well done.
My pleasure, Alicia. Thanks for visiting and responding. That’s always appreciated.
janet
This one brought the tears. Missing my sister very much these days… When I was a kid, one of my favorite things to do was to lie in the front yard grass watching clouds float by – and, of course, finding pictures in them.
Awww, Judah. So sorry she’s gone. It sounds as though you have some of the wonderful memories of the woman in my story and that’s truly a blessing.
janet
True that, Janet.
This made me sad and happy at the same time, good job!
The cadence in this was beautiful, cleverly done 🙂
Some lovely memories there, and nicely structure. Well done.
Thanks, Sandra.
jannet
can you do me a favor? in this line, “…’ll be seeing them again with you.” can you think about adding a comma or something after “again”? the “with you” is very important, of course, and a little bit of a pause before it will allow it to partly stand out a little more. like a dramatic pause. think about it. this was great.
I’ve read it both ways and both seem to work. I’ll revisit it after a bit of lunch. I think the emphasis changes slightly but that doesn’t mean it would be a bad or worse change. Either way, I’m glad you liked the story and appreciate your thoughts on it.
janet
one of those “happy-sad” things. sad for the moment, but happy for the big picture.
I wish someone painted a sky on a ceiling for her. But I suspect she didn’t need it. Sometimes we just know when is the time to let go. Lovely story.
That’s a lovely thought! What if everyone confined to bed was allowed to choose what to have on their ceiling, whether painted or not? How wonderful that would be! (Expensive and time-consuming, too, probably, but…)
Wow, you’ve given me the shivers Janet. A perfect little gem back to you!
Praise from the praiseworthy is much appreciated, Claire.
Janet, This was lovely in the melancholy way you took us through her life and love.
Thanks very much. Have to say that I felt the only melancholy thing was that her husband died before she did. 🙂 I felt as though her life was filled with good things, although as Hamish pointed out earlier, if she died younger, it would be sadder.
janet
Very true.
I found this to be very peaceful.
Good, Dawn. I think it was.
janet
Lovely story, Janet. That is the way most of us would choose to go, with happy memories and peacefully. I don’t see it as sad either. Good music. 🙂
I love that Moody Blues song, Patricia! I’m glad you did, too. I’ve been know to crank it really high and sing along, at least when I’m alone. 🙂 I’m glad you liked the story as well, of course!
janet
An entire life in 100 words. Unbelievably beautiful. And a perfect ending!
Thanks very much, Emilio. We should all pray our lives are as beautiful, don’t you think?
Have a lovely Thursday!
janet
Dear Janet,
Lovely. Life cycle and the history of a beautiful friendship. Happy or sad depending on your point of view. 😉 I’ve read it three times now and it just gets better.
shalom,
Rochelle
To be re-read once is great; yet again a true reward. Thanks.
janet
very cool…….
Glad you liked it.
janet
Lovely story and a great song to go with it. Thanks for both.
My pleasure, Subroto. Thanks for visiting.
janete
A beautiful eulogy to be, with the perfect musical accompaniment.
I enjoyed this a lot.
Thanks very much, El Guapo, and thanks for the visit. I see you on some other blogs I follow and I always get a kick out of your name as it brings “The Three Amigos” to mind. And that’s always fun!
janet
Thanks, and nice to meet you!
(That’s exactly where the name comes from, via us quoting from the movie in college.)
Well, I’m still standing, El Guapo. 🙂
Well done, Janet! Lovely and heart-wrenching! We took similar paths this week.
Obviously great paths, Lisa. 🙂
Obviously! 🙂
Slowly working my way towards your story.
No worries! You’re under no obligation. It’s hard to get to all of them.
I know I’m not obligate, but I like reading them all. It just take some time. And if I were just picking, I’d read yours anyway.
Awww, that’s sweet. I appreciate it. I always read yours too.
I appreciate that right back. 🙂
This literally brought tears to my eyes. Only a couple of stories have done this to me, and certainly not one of only 100 words. This is just one of those stories that is so moving that there is little left to say. You had me at the glittering canopy of stars… The delayed last line gave even more weight to the memories, but it was a bittersweet ending. This is absolutely outstanding. Thank you so much for writing it!
It was both my pleasure to write it and to read how it made you feel. Thanks ever so much!
janet
This is really beautiful, Janet. I work at Hospice, and reading this brought several wonderful patients to mind… those final hours (days), when they remember so many things and drift in and out of those memories. Really bittersweet.
I’m glad to hear that it worked from the “professional” angle. Thanks so much for that.
janet
Well, hospice is always personal… it works on all levels. 😉 Nice piece of writing!
Wow, Janet, even though I’m way, way too young to relate to any of those stages of life beyond “reclined, awash in music and love at our first date,” what an impact!
Hopefully this makes you realize that there’s life after you finally do get older, Perry. 🙂
janet
I so loved this. Warmed my heart no end….
Jolly
I’m glad, Jolly. Thanks.
janet
how sweet. commitment is key to a great relationship.
Even more than love, I daresay.
janet
Oh Janet, this is so beautiful! Life is so short and before you realize it. Such a poignant piece. Good for you! Great job! Nan 🙂
I’m glad you liked it, Nan.
janet
Really touching, Janet.
I liked it as it ends with hope to meet our loved one after their death… Then, see the stars together!!! WOW!
I believe in that hope, Anita. 🙂
janet
I love the list structure and your use of it was superlative, Janet.
I’m happy you liked it, Karen. It was the only way I could get in all different sentences, as making each a complete sentence would have used many more words.
janet
Really poignant. And a great structure.
Thanks, Patrick. The structure saved me words and made it more poetic (at least in my eyes.)
janet
this was really lovely.. such beautiful memories. she lived a happy life.
Thanks, kz. She did and she was ready to go. Would that it would be that way for all of us.
Enjoy the weekend,
janet
A good story Janet and you gave it an extra good push with the Moody Blues clip!
Thank you
Regards
Jim
Thanks for reading and commenting, Jim. Have a great weekend.
janet
A whole, incredible life captured in so few words–lovely and poignant.
Here’s mine: http://unexpectedpaths.com/friday-fictioneers/memento-mori/
Thanks, Maggie. I’m slowly working my way through the stories, so I’ll get to yours at some point. Thanks for reading mine.
janet
kinda bitter-sweet. well-written
Thanks very much and also for taking the time to read, like and comment! 🙂
janet
sweet and nostalgic.
Thanks, Carrie. Enjoy your weekend.
janet
gut-wrenchingly powerful poem. Sad, but so beautifully written
Thank you, Bryan. I appreciate that.
janet
Hi Janet, I liked this story a lot because it made me feel. It’s not so important if it makes me happy or sad but I do like to feel something when I read. You gave me several emotions in 100 words so well done. 🙂
Thanks and thanks for taking the time to stop by as I know you’re busy.
janet
My pleasure 🙂
This one made me feel good. It touches a lot of emotional chords.
Thanks much, Russ. I’m glad.
janet
Calm acceptance at the end of a long and full life. Lovely!
Glad you liked it. I have more stories to work through today. Enjoy your weekend.
janet
Such beautiful sentiments lovingly told. I love the format allowing for all those memories. You do a love story so well.
I’m basically an loving optimist (except sometimes while driving), Sarah Ann. I think that’s what colors much of my writing. I’m glad you liked the format, too. It’s a combination of expediency and a bent toward poetry.
janet
I like the way this rounds out with a full circle of life in the end.
MG
Thanks, Marie. That was one of my objective. 🙂
janet
There’s a circle at the top of that canopy thing through which one sees the sky. I see the completeness of a circle in your poem and I’m glad your character sees that kind of completeness as she nears her end. I doubt I will! Great, thoughtful, poignant writing. 🙂
Thanks, Ann. I hope you do, too. 🙂
janet
I’m going to take up horseriding shortly. There are these four horseman … If I put my ear to the ground, can I hear their hooves, thundering down on me?
I felt every word and saw every star with her. A sad story, but wonderful all the same. Just, beautiful.
Love, Renee
Happy Saturday, Renee. Lovely to have you drop by and even more so that you liked the post. Hope your recovery is going well. So thankful you weren’t even more badly injured!
janet
I’m doing better every day my dear. It could have been worse but I’m tired of the wheelchair already. Giggle.
The story was lovely. I didn’t write about romance this time. It was good to see you did. Sad, but happy. If that makes sense.
Love, Renee
You managed to pack a lifetime into this one.
Thanks, Alice. That was one of my intentions. Hard to do in 100 words. 🙂 Thanks for stopping in.
janet
You really make it easy to experience the flashback & the sorrow
That’s good to hear, Larry.
janet
An excellent pick of music at the end, and the story captures an essence that is very poignant. Excellent work! 😀
Good morning, Miles. Thanks for stopping by and reading my story. I’m glad you liked both it and the music.
Enjoy your Sunday.
janet
Janet I love the flashback of their life together. I found the story both sad and uplifting at the same time.
Just lovely
Dee
Thanks, Dee. The combination was what I was looking for, so I’m glad that came through. Isn’t all life like that?
janet
So touching. And I Love the Moody Blues…
Thanks. I like them, too. 🙂
janet
Wow, this was so full of feeling. I loved it, loved the way you built it up to a culmination.
Hi, Madison. Thanks for stopping by. I was attempting to get an entire life (and death) as well as the happy and sad and it seems as though it worked. I’m glad.
janet
a childhood friendship that lives forever. so love this story! beautiful.
Sun, I’m so glad. Thanks for sharing a bit of the weekend with me and my story.
janet
Heartwarming despite the sadness
That’s what I was hoping for, Siobhan. Thanks.
janet