4:37 am

Posted: August 19, 2014 in Poetry
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             4:37 am

Drawn-out train whistle
    pulls me rudely from a dream. 
Second punctures hope of returning. 
    farther away
    echoes mockingly.

  1. words4jp says:

    Good one;). I just had this happen with thunder – about 25 minutes ago. I finally fell asleep….now I am not. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Madhu says:

    Well crafted Janet ๐Ÿ™‚

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